Giving speech tonight to Girl Scouts need it proofread

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05-05-2011, 09:27 AM

Awesumpunk

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Hi everyone,
Tonight I'm giving a speech to the Girl Scouts for the charity I work for, can someone proofread it please

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05-05-2011, 09:32 AM

Lisa_wanna_b_quilter

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You spelled currently wrong in the last paragraph. Of course, if it is just for you to read from it won't matter.

I hope you get a good response! :)

05-05-2011, 09:37 AM

Awesumpunk

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thanks it is for me just to read,i just don't want to sound stupid up there...

05-05-2011, 09:45 AM

bluteddi

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sounds awesome...... take a deep breathe and speak let ur voice be heard!! Good job!!

05-05-2011, 11:02 AM

cherylynne

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Sounds great and heartfelt. Might want to change the word "stuff" in 3rd paragraph from the end to "supplies".

05-06-2011, 02:16 AM

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It went well, the Troop Mom's all liked the speech! Everyone clapped for me, even some of the girls. One of them was off climbing on tables with another girl, but they're 9 so it doesn't really matter much to me. They made 8 blankets last night. Their blankets will go to Stony Brook (one of our local hospitals). Thank You everyone for your suggestions!